Tuesday, April 17, 2012

Another Choice

Hello friends, once again I need your help. Vote for your favorite "pitch". which one would make you pick up this book?

1.) A hired killer decides to turn his next hit into an elaborate game targeting eleven people and leading local detectives on a wild goose chase.

When one of his victims narrowly escapes, he’s faced with something he’s not accustomed to, his own failure. The voice tells him it’s time to cut and run but his ego won’t let him leave until the game is finished.

The suspense mounts as the killer becomes more unstable and detectives get closer. It all comes to a head in a building rigged to explode, and only the fiery conclusion will reveal who lives and who dies.


2.) Gage Maverick has three dead bodies. The killer is careful, using fire to cleanse each scene of clues. The only connection is the package each victim received. What does the strange content reveal? Can he figure out the irrational clues before someone else dies?

Jenny Malone opens her mail only to discover a bizarre package that will transform her simple ordered life into one of terror, disillusionment and murder. She must find an inner strength she never knew she possessed, but will it be enough? Will she survive?



3.) A hired killer decides to turn his next hit into an elaborate game targeting eleven people and leading detectives Gage Maverick and Sam Lark on a wild goose chase.

When Jenny Malone narrowly escapes his attack, he’s faced with something he’s not accustomed to, failure. The voice tells him it’s time to cut and run but his ego won’t let him leave until the game is finished.

The suspense mounts as the killer becomes more unstable and detectives get closer. It all comes to a head in a building rigged to explode, and only the fiery conclusion will reveal who lives and who dies.


4.) It was a day just like any other day. A package in the mail, an envelope with no return address that sits in a pile with the rest of the days correspondence. How could she know that this unassuming envelope with its bizarre assortment of papers would transform her life in a matter of days?

How could she know that this package would put her in the cross hairs of a deranged killer? That this package would propel her into a world where she had no experience. A world where nothing is at it should be. A world of terror, disillusionment and murder.

This package would give her the opportunity to find an inner strength that she never knew she possessed. But would it be enough? Could she survive?

9 comments:

  1. I vote for # 2.

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  2. #2 But I would identify Gage as a detective if that's what he is. Otherwise we're wondering why he has 3 dead bodies. :)

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  3. Definitely # 2.

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  4. Judy Mosley Fletcher
    I vote for #2. I agree with the comment Tracy made regarding identifying Gage as a detective.

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  5. Thank you everyone who voted. Looks like #2 is the winner. Send up a quick prayer for me as I submit this to a publisher.

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